Drew
WWW: You have made some progress on your blogs and you've included several more than during the first assessment two weeks ago...however...
EBI:
- This is extremely concerning, you must raise the quality and quantity of your work before the deadline on Tuesday. But, unfortunately, your work is nowhere near where it needs to be to make your target grade, and in this case I am forced to refer you. I hope I will not have to refer you again come Tuesday.
- You need to check for spelling, grammar and punctuation. Many of your sentences do not begin with capital letters.
- Your analytical entries need to be much more specific. To say that "main shots are long shots, mid shots and close ups", means nothing because you've effectively included every type of shot as being a "main" shot. You need to pick several specific elements and explain how meaning is created through them.
- Your Pop Music Analysis 2 and 3 are both incomplete.
- None of your Rock Music Video Analyses are complete. You need to include *specific* analysis of the micro elements within each of these videos.
- You are missing: 12 entries presently.
GRADE - UN
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